7/6 – IT’S FINISHED!!! I completed the last chapter of “Clubius Contained”. It took 4 weeks instead of 3, but it was on the long side. Now I need to focus starting my next one, “Clubius Besieged”, about going to junior high!
6/8 – Again did this shorter chapter, #43, in three weeks, the second to last in the book!
5/19 – Just a day over three weeks to post Chapter 42, which was a very challenging piece to write, trying to weave in all the layers of a moment in time as I am transitioning from “childhood” to “youth”
4/27 – Posted Chapter 41. I took an extended break in my writing for a trip to Boston for my niece’s wedding and my 70th birthday. Since then been taking a while to get back in the swing of writing, but am hopefully finally back there. Figure three more chapters until I finish this novel
3/9 – Posted Chapter 40, sticking to the three week schedule. A trip east and my 70s birthday are ahead so will be at least some disruption.
2/16 – Posted Chapter 39, which only took me two weeks. Now I’m finally into the last set of chapters with the culmination of my childhood.
2/1 – Finally posted Chapter 38, in a little shorter than my 3-week cadance. Getting there!
1/12 – Wrote and posted Chapter 37, admittedly a shorter one, in just 15 days. Just have a handful of chapters to go to finish
12/27 – Posted my latest chapter, a difficult one to write because my character was not at his best, but though long, squeezed creating it into my 3-week timeframe. Getting excited to be only a handful more chapters from being done!
12/7 – Felt great to get this very long and involved chapter, including many hours of mapping out scenes in the “Thunderball” movie, done in my 3-week cadence. Feeling like I’m seeing light at the end of the tunnel of completion of “Clubius Contained”!
11/17 – A lot of work recalling, researching and reinventing as necessary my “Cooperstown Cats” and coming up with a new alliterative name for my renamed brother character’s hockey team, but managed to stick to the three-week cadence.
10/27 – Yet another challenging chapter, including wrestling with all my old psychic wounds from the divorce, not remembering ANYTHING about this period of time (maybe I blocked it) and thus having to make it all up! Also a lot of continuity issues stringing the various scenes together against the calendar and making the details about what happened when consistent with each other, if ultimately made up! But I stuck to my 3-week cadence so I’m very happy with that.
10/6 – Another challenging chapter, covering some key psychological shrapnel from my you, but cranked out in that 3 week cadance I’ve been managing to follow lately. Yay!
9/15 – I feel good that I was able to crank out this long 30 page chapter in this 3-week cadence I am trying to stick to. 2 weeks to pound out a rough first draft, and then the 3rd week for 2nd, 3rd, etc drafts to clean, polish, and juice it up.
8/24 – Starting from scratch on this one was able to get it out in just under 3 weeks. I think I can keep to that cadence. Start with an outline then pound out a rough first draft by the end of the second week. Spend the third doing second and additional drafts as needed to clean it up, flesh it out and juice it up!
8/5 – I was able to get this chapter out in just over 2 weeks, though I did already have it outlined. This one was more about my internal thought processes after another long year of school.
7/22 – Despite being a longer chapter, tho full of dialog, I was able to get thru this one in just about 3 weeks. I’m going to try to keep to that cadence if I can. This one was more fun because it was a party with all those characters that I really enjoy writing!
6/30 – I was able to push out chapter 27 in about 3 weeks. I’d like to keep that cadence if I can!
6/8 – Chapter 26 took nearly 4 weeks as well, tho it was a longer chapter with more scenes!
5/14 – Chapter 25 took a bit longer, nearly four weeks.
4/19 – Chapter 24, which was significantly shorter, took exactly two weeks. Happy to finally be moved from Allmendinger to my last two years of elementary in Burns Park!
4/5 – Chapter 23 took 3 weeks, but it was longer and trickier, but glad it’s done and “in the can”, at least for now!
3/14 – Finished chapter 22 in 11 days. Trying to keep up with this pace!
3/3 – Finished chapter 21 in just a couple weeks, thou I had a mostly completed rough draft from before.
2/17 – Finished chapter 20 in less than 3 weeks. Excited about keeping this pace!
1/30 – Finished chapter 19 in about 3 weeks. Trying to keep that quicker pace up!
1/8 – Finished chapter 18 in under 2 weeks. Hopefully getting a little writing momentum going and on to the next!
12/26 – Finished chapter 17. Did this one in 2 1/2 weeks so keeping that momentum going in my writing!
12/8 – Finished chapter 16. Actually did it in two weeks. Spent the previous two drafting a chapter I finally decided needed to pushed forward a year in my story, from 1963 to 1964.
11/9 – Finished chapter 15.
10/10 – Finished chapter 14. Would like to speed up my writing process to get out a chapter every two weeks, but so far not!
9/6 – Finished chapter 13.
8/12 – A long haul to finish a long chapter 12.
6/30 – Finished chapter 11.
5/31 – Finished chapter 10.
5/12 – Have been having problems with my site. I’m still in the process to resolving them so folks may have intermittent access! Sorry for the confusion… I’m trying to work things out!
4/16 – Took nearly 4 weeks to do chapter 8, but it was another long chapter. Realize I haven’t been updating this for each chapter, so I should go back and do that!
3/20 – Well chapter 7 was long and it took almost 5 weeks… ugh!
2/16 – Took just 2 weeks for chapter 6, tho it WAS a shorter one. Trending well!
2/2 – Took a little more than 3 weeks to do chapter 5. I’d like to be able to stick with 3 weeks per chapter!
1/9 – Took 25 days for CC chapter 4, but had the holidays in there, but happy to keep moving forward!
12/15 – Took 23 days for chapter 3 of CC. A bit longer that chapter 2, but still less than a month. Hoping to push it down to more like 2 weeks per chapter!
11/22 – Took just 18 days to write the second chapter of CC. Will try to keep up the pace!
11/4 – Posted first chapter of “Clubius Contained”. Hoping to be able to up my writing production to get thru what should be about a 40 chapter story in 2 or 3 years!
10/14 – Now pondering on getting started on the follow up novel, “Clubius” Contained”, my narrative about my elementary school years from ages 5 to 11.
10/13 – Posted the final chapter of “Clubius Incarnate”. I had written a good chunk of it before, so it didn’t take as long to complete it. I am very pleased to have written a story from the point of view of a 3 to 5 year old, something I’m at least not aware of having been done before!
10/7 – As I work on the final chapter of “Clubius Incarnate”, I am also beginning to update my written “Two Inch Heels” introduction and chapters based on the updated version that I recorded for my podcast.
9/29 – Posted 40th chapter. Shorter than previous ones with more interior monologue than dialogue. Second to last chapter trying to wrap things up and set the stage for the next story, “Clubius Contained”, where I go to elementary school.
9/9 – Posted 39th chapter. Long and complicated, including reviewing the movie in detail.
8/3 – Posted 38th chapter. Longest one so far with a fair amount of research and crown sourcing about trip to the stadium and the events of the actual game.
6/24 – Posted 37th chapter. Quicker chapter, just took me 2 1/2 weeks.
6/7 – Posted 36th chapter. Another long one. Hope to complete this story with planned 5 more chapters!
5/3 – Posted 35th chapter. Seem to be able to put out one chapter a month.
4/7 – Posted 34th chapter. A particularly long one but with a lot of dialog.
3/10 – Posted 33rd chapter of Clubius Incarnate. Tried to capture the key movie clips and my reactions.
2/9 – Posted 32nd chapter of Clubius Incarnate. Pushing forward with another maybe eight chapters to go, tho multitasking with my Two Inch Heels podcasting.
1/21 – Posted 31st chapter of Clubius Incarnate. Closest thing I’ve written to situation comedy, but with a poignant ending!
12/9 – Finally posted chapter 30 of Clubius Incarnate, just 10 more planned chapters to go! Shooting to finish by maybe the end of April.
12/6 – Been focused on getting my podcasts of “Two Inch Heels” up on the various podcasting sites. Have an intro and first 12 chapters posted, just 41 more to go!
12/2 – Still working on chapter 30 of Clubius Incarnate, but have now posted an intro & first 10 chapters of Two Inch Heels podcast!
11/22 – Started on chapter 30 but have shifted focus for the moment to trying to publish my audio chapters of Two Inch Heels on Podbean and Apple Podcasts.
11/14 – So much for cadence! Just posted chapter 29, a very long one with several levels of story to address!
10/19 – Keeping that cadence of a new chapter every two weeks. This one, 28, built around another of my interesting developmental experiences watching TV.
10/7 – Getting into maybe a flow of posting a new chapter every two weeks! This one, 27, wasn’t part of my original outline for “Clubius Incarnate” but kind of came out of nowhere.
9/25 – This chapter 26 was rewritten based on an earlier piece I wrote about my dad.
9/15 – Got this latest chapter 25 of “Clubius Incarnate” relatively quickly and hope this momentum can grow!
9/2 – After working on or at it all summer, I finally was able to post my next “Clubius Incarnate” chapter, “Nursery School”. Turned out was very difficult to reconstruct a home-based pre-school in the late 1950s in progressive Ann Arbor, then build a whole story leading up to my one vivid memory of pleading with a kid thru the fence to get me out of there.
8/26 – Finally got my “Two Inch Heels” summary page properly updated referencing the new five opening chapters. Still in the process of renumbering all the old chapters.
8/25 – Have taken a break from “Clubius Incarnate” to try creating podcast episodes for “Two Inch Heels”, and in the process ending up rewriting the first three chapters into now five chapters. Posting the podcasts are still TBD at this point.
6/14 – Just 2 weeks to get out chapter 22 tho about half as long as the previous one, written as a recap by my character rather than scenes with dialog.
5/30 – Getting back in the groove of writing after my transition into retirement. Chapter 21 is quite long and chocked full of stuff as I start to develop that ‘tude befitting a four year old.
4/25 – Finally got chapter 20 posted, pushing the story forward up to my fourth birthday.
3/14 – These chapters of my early youth, including chapter 19 just posted seem so much harder to render, since I’m pretty much making up so much of the detail based on my few slivers of memory and what I was told.
2/14 – Another long slog with chapter 18, recreating the Christmas I spent at my grandparents house and trying to bring all my family members’ characters alive.
1/10 – I rewrote the intro paragraphs for my “Two Inch Heels” memoir to try to better capture the gist of the thing and make a more compelling case to a potential reader.
12/19 – Finally got this very challenging chapter 17 posted after sharing a draft with my aunt Pat and getting her input. This writing is much more challenging given I am writing as a very young person and obviously have no written journal to base my pieces on.
11/6 – This piece was half written back a year and a half ago when I decided to rewrite Two Inch Heels, and now I have finally gotten back to this very different “imagined memoir” from the point of view of a truly young person!
10/24 – Final chapter rewrite completed. A great deal of emotion for me to let this thing go and be what it will be, and moving on!
10/18 – Chapter 44, another quick rewrite. Almost done! Hope to have the last chapter polished off next weekend!
10/16 – Another quick rewrite of chapter 43, a climax of sorts and another one of my favorites.
10/11 – A quick rewrite of chapter 42.
10/4 – I read the new posted version of 41 and felt I needed to make more updates.
10/3 – Rewrite of chapter 41, one of my favorites.
9/27 – Rewrite of chapter 40.
9/19 – Now a particularly long chapter but sticking to my weekly pace, a rewrite of chapter 39.
9/12 – Still on a cadence of one piece a week, posted rewrite of chapter 38.
9/5 – On a role with these quicker rewrites, reworked several conversations and posted chapter 37.
8/30 – Another quick rewrite of chapter 36 despite expanding a previously summarized conversation.
8/28 – Was a quick rewrite of the 2nd half of chapter 35, since there were not summarized conversations to build out into the real thing.
8/23 – Broke chapter 35 into two parts, and posted rewrite of the first part, turning the paragraph overview of the conversation in the brewery into a major dialog scene.
8/16 – Rewrite of part 34 included truncating piece at end of initial day and turning the conversation summaries into more real conversation.
8/8 – Rewrite of part 33 took a bit more work, but some nice adds including a song lyric to keep that trend going in every chapter.
8/1 – The rewrite of part 32 was pretty quick, only adding a little dialog to replace dialog summary. It is an interesting decision when to use actual dialog vs summarizing that dialog.
7/26 – After the slog thru 30, just needed a fairly quick rewrite of part 31, again just turning some conversation summary into dialog.
7/25 – Finally posted the rewritten part 30, which I almost let remain pretty much as it was, but then decided to rewrite the summarized conversation as mostly actual dialog and did some serious expansion of the piece.
7/12 – And part 29 B quickly follows with the new title ‘Triumvirate’
7/11 – Posted separated and somewhat updated first half of 29th chapter, still with the ‘Snow Day’ title
7/10 – Posted rewritten 28th chapter, happy that these latest chapters seem to need less rework, and sorry for the length!
7/3 – Posted rewritten 27th chapter, finding a nice pacing to the piece and again some added character dialog and an additional provocative verse for “Marching to Pretoria” coming home from the village pub
6/29 – Posted rewritten 26th chapter, with just some added dialog to flesh out characters and match the continuity of more use of the Cleveland gang in my earlier Italy pieces
6/26 – Posted rewritten 25th chapter, not as extensive rewrite, just part in tunnel. Definitely won’t finish whole thing by August target, but hopefully by end of year
6/14 – Posted rewritten 24th chapter, another fairly extensive rewrite
5/29 – Posted rewritten 23rd chapter, doubling the length of the piece
5/15 – Posted second rewritten half of 22nd chapter, another extensive rewrite
4/19 – Posted first rewritten half of 22nd chapter, probably my biggest most challenging rewrite so far
3/22 – Posted rewritten 21st chapter, with significant additions of dialog
2/29 – Posted second half (part B) of now split 20th chapter, with some significant changes
2/16 – Posted first half (part A) of now split 20th chapter, because it was so long and really now lent itself to division.
2/6 – Posted the second half (part B) of old 19th chapter.
1/31 – Posted first half (part A) of now split in two 19th chapter, because it had gotten so long, including a significant rewrite adding some dialog to flesh our my characters Morgan, Jen and Sarah!
1/19 – Posted rewritten 18th chapter, with more of a rewrite adding some dialog to try and tie up Steve story better!
1/17 – Posted rewritten 17th chapter, with a minor rewrite!
1/13 – Posted rewritten 16th chapter, with very little I felt I could rewrite this time!
1/12 – Posted rewritten 15th chapter, with lesser rewrite!
1/4 – Posted rewritten 14th chapter, with lesser rewrite!
12/26 – Posted rewritten 13th chapter, with big rewrite of a major scene!
12/15 – Posted rewritten 12th chapter, a long piece!
12/8 – Posted rewritten 11th chapter, trying to capture a very different feel of things in Spain!
11/22 – Posted rewritten 10th chapter, I really liked how I was able to amp up characters and get a good flow!
11/9 – Posted rewritten 9th chapter
10/20 – Posted rewritten 8th chapter
10/19 – Posted rewritten 7th chapter
10/9 – Posted rewritten 6th chapter
9/29 – Posted rewritten 5th chapter
9/22 – Posted rewritten 4th chapter
9/8 – Posted rewritten 3rd chapter. Feeling good about rewrite enriching depth of story.
9/2 – Posted rewritten 2nd chapter with significant rewrite involving adding some key conversations
8/18 – Posted a now rewritten, expanded and divided 1st chapter of my memoir, now titled “Two Inch Heels”, of backpacking thru Europe in 1973 at age 18.
I don’t think you’re crazy. I agree with some of your points. But I think you push these points to an extreme that I do not support, because I think this extreme view would not be in the public interest.
Let me pick on what seems to be the core of your policy position. You say:
“I believe that… public educational resources should be offered without a strict state-mandated agenda for what, where, when, how, why and from whom you must learn.”
I think this position is hard to support. Presumably the rationale for public support of education is that we think that there are public benefits. The reason I should invest in “other people’s children” is that the overall society and economy benefits when everyone is more educated. But this necessarily involves SOME standards for what is to be learned through this education, and what kind of citizens, workers, and people come out of this education.
Now, I think there is reason for debate as to how these standards for education should be set, and how they should be monitored. We can debate the relative role of elected school boards, state legislatures, the federal government, teachers and parents at individual schools, etc. in deciding on these standards. We can debate the relative role of standardized tests versus less standardized assessments versus more subjective evaluations by principals, etc. But I don’t see how public dollars can be rationalized without some public process for determining what those public dollars are paying for and ensuring that in fact that occurs.
Cooper –
In many ways I agree with you but, at the same time, it’s difficult to see how we can honor such libertarian ideals while also guaranteeing every child at least a basic education. Reality, of course, is that not all parents have the wherewithal to home educate their kids or to place them in private schools (and there are some who will make a conscious decision NOT to educate their children at all if they have the option) and I think it’s definitely in our community’s ethical and democratic interest to make sure all kids have access to educational opportunities, regardless of their parents’ situations.
As a teacher, I consider the mandates we’ve been handed to be impossible to reconcile and, sometimes, patently ridiculous. We’re supposed to differentiate instruction, indeed to essentially individualize our teaching, yet all students are subject to the same standards and the same tests on those standards. Many districts are encouraging or requiring common assessments and even common lesson plans. Research doesn’t back up this approach, and most teachers are well aware that it’s not best practice; unfortunately, we usually have no choice in the matter. Frankly, the idea that a principal should be able to hear me say “Good…” in my class and then walk across the hall to hear another teacher say “…morning”, is completely absurd. I have yet to hear a satisfactory explanation as to how this approach is best for students.
With that out of my system, in an ideal world I’d like to see grade-less classes; students wouldn’t be arbitrarily separated by age but, rather, would move between subjects and topics as they showed individual readiness and interest, and they wouldn’t have the coercion of letter grades to influence their work. Teachers would act as mentors rather than task-masters, each teacher facilitating for 10-15 students, and that teacher would stick with that group for their entire elementary and secondary education (matching students up with subject matter experts, university professors, etc. as necessary).
It would be nice.
I consider public education part of the “commons”, like our transportation infrastructure, parks, libraries, Internet. Like roads, libraries, parks, the Internet, etc, we can make it available to people without requiring that they use it and detailing every aspect about how and when they use it.
I have faith in people’s natural desire to learn and to take advantage of opportunities to learn. Forcing people to learn IMO is counterproductive.
If taxpayers are paying for schools, then we should be providing schools that are good facilities, with good staff and other resources that create an enriched environment for learning of a broad range of skills and other knowledge, while also respecting students and adult staff’s civil rights. No more than that! Let all those learners loose in these enriched learning environments!
I’m for working towards your ideal world, where you as a teacher would have only kids in your presence who wanted to be there! Removing the 19th century mandate that kids must go to school and do what the teacher says or else, would completely shift the current paradigm and make the experience for both teachers and students so much better.
This of course is based on my belief that human beings naturally want to learn and would come to schools, even if not coerced, because of that opportunity to learn. I know others (not you) believe that human beings hate learning and school so they must be forced to comply against their will if necessary for their own good.
I think we just have some fundamental disagreements. I don’t think that whether a child receives an education should be left to the free choice of that child (they’re too young to make that choice) or to their parents (some parents are neglectful). Our broader society has too much at stake. And the potential future adult that may or may not develop from that child has too much at stake to give full sovereignity to the child and parent.
So I think people should be required to have a certain basic education. But I agree with you that we should not “detail every aspect about how and when they use it”.
And I disagree that “forcing people to learn” is always counterproductive. I don’t agree with the way you’re framing that issue. For example, how many elementary school students like memorizing multiplication tables? But if you want an easy familiarity with numbers as an adult, which is important in many careers, then you later on will be quite grateful that this memorization was required.
It also seems to me that your later statement is conceding SOME level of accountability. “If taxpayers are paying for schools, then we should be providing schools that are good facilities, with good staff and other resources that create an enriched environment for learning of a broad range of skills and other knowledge, while also respecting students and adult staff’s civil rights.”
Well, what is a “good facility”? What is a “good staff”? What is an “enriched environment for learning”? What is a “broad range of skills”? Someone has to answer all these questions in deciding what programs get funding. Someone has to have some sort of accountability system in deciding how to measure whether a given program is meeting these criteria. We can debate whether that someone should be federal, state, or local governments, and the extent to which that accountability relies on quantitative measures or more qualitative judgments. authorities. But there has to be some system of determining what programs are really providing a good education, even if we use a relatively broad definition of what that means.
Tim… I guess I would agree we have some fundamental differences. You don’t see the same degree of downside I do to coercing people to try and learn things against their will. I agree with radical educator John Holt when he observes that, “Good students forget the material after the test” (where bad students forget before).
I don’t see the problem you state evaluating an educational venue based on what it offers rather than based on the outcomes of users of that venue. We offer libraries to the public and evaluate how well they are operated and the services they provide without testing all the people that use the library to see if they have acquired more testable knowledge after library use. I think schools can be evaluated without all this high-stakes evaluation of the students.
So do we really have a fundamental disagreement on human nature? Do I see it as naturally inquisitive and proactive while you see it as naturally lethargic and lazy? If we weren’t forced to learn we would naturally choose not to?
BTW… I appreciate you engaging in this discussion. I learn from it the underlying reasons why people have different beliefs than I and how I can better present my take on things! Thank you for that!
I also post my blog pieces on Daily KOS, where I usually get a much more robust discussion of the ideas I put forward. Check it out if you are interested at http://www.dailykos.com/story/2012/09/26/1136833/-Fundamentally-Opposed-to-Mandatory-Standardized-Education
Hi Cooper, I’m the one who wandered in and read (and commented on) one of your older posts (F**g Math about your pulling your child from the school system due to the math stuff.
I’ve read some of your new posts now. Very impressive to have a comprehensive view of what’s wrong with education and with the various efforts to reform and re-engineer it. I looked for an “about me” on the site to see if you had any history of how you arrived at your positions and as to whether this is a career or not for you. Either way, it’s striking writing and I’ll follow it.
I’ve always had radical views on education although my own experiences in public schools and traditional universities were great. Look forward to reading more…
So now I’m really curious since you indicate that you always have had radical views on education. What do you think of my transition from hierarchy to circles of equals world view and how it calls out the context behind our issues with education? Very foundational to that world view are the work of three writers, Riane Eisler and her book The Chalice and the Blade, radical educator John Taylor Gatto and his book The Underground History of American Education, and radical educator John Holt and his advocacy for “unschooling. Have you read any of these three’s work?
I would enjoy hearing more about your views of public education, influenced by your good experience. My own was very mixed! If you are blogging or would consider blogging, you might consider participating in our “Education Alternatives” group on Daily KOS, a progressive political blog site where you can post your thoughts and have the opportunity to get some readers, some feedback, and generate discussion. Let me know if you are interested and I will tell you how to sign up, post and participate.
Thanks again for commenting… It’s all about the dialog towards human development!
Hi!
Thank you so much for sharing your ideas:). Blogs like yours have bean and still are a lifeline for our family.
Have you seen the work of Peter Gray, I think you can take a look at his book Freedom to learn. He makes the case that we as human beings actually have evolved in a social environment where living within the circles of equals was the norm for thousands of years.
Parant from Norway
Nusreta… I appreciate your comment, it made my day!
I have not read Peter Gray’s book but I am familiar with work, seeing some of his white-board presentations on Youtube. But from all the reading I have done about human history and anthropology, I agree with Peter that for most of our specie’s existence we have been egalitarian and that is our basic nature, driven by our love for our kind. Ironically, it was basically fear that was the organizing principle of “civilization” as it emerged some 5000 years ago, going against the circle of equals in favor of a hierarchy of control.
I’m dedicating my life to witnessing and cheerleading for a needed return to our egalitarian nature. Glad you are on board for that quest and happy I can be some sort of a lifeline to you.